Oh goodness! Thank you so very much! I actually made pretty much this same request for Yuletide and now I'm almost regretting it because I love how well you've captured them all here.
Your Maggie is graceful and somehow still a bit fragile even after all she's weathered in life. I love how she justifies to herself that she can look anywhere she likes, Nate be darned, since she's a single woman after all.
Eliot's segment was unexpected and deliciously fun. I love that he's taken in with Nate because he's Nate.
And oh Nate! Nate always makes me smile. The details you put into his perceptions of everyone were wonderful. I particularly liked how Nate thought Maggie was someone different, strange, while she was watching Eliot.
I just can't thank you enough! I'm silly and gushing but it's exactly what I wanted!
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Date: 2009-11-11 05:28 am (UTC)Your Maggie is graceful and somehow still a bit fragile even after all she's weathered in life. I love how she justifies to herself that she can look anywhere she likes, Nate be darned, since she's a single woman after all.
Eliot's segment was unexpected and deliciously fun. I love that he's taken in with Nate because he's Nate.
And oh Nate! Nate always makes me smile. The details you put into his perceptions of everyone were wonderful. I particularly liked how Nate thought Maggie was someone different, strange, while she was watching Eliot.
I just can't thank you enough! I'm silly and gushing but it's exactly what I wanted!